Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Story part 3

Author's Note:  This is the third part I've completed in my story about the character Tinny. I realize the parts of the larger story don't fit together right now, but I'm mulling over how I am going to do that. All in due time. Until then, here is the third part of the story.


Sweet Nothings

“I have a devil in me:
He makes me spit in your face,
He makes me laugh at the law—
I have a devil in me.”

--The Meat Purveyors, “I Have a Devil in Me”

Craig put some sad song by some band I’d never heard of on the television through his iPad. We listened in silence.

Though not normally one for mournful indie rock, I found the song enjoyable, which surprised me. Most of the time I think those hipster bitches are whiny jackasses when they get on those extended minor chord tangents. Eh, so your girl left you and life’s a big bucket o’ suck—you ain’t dead, so shut yer nasally yap. Everyone goes through trials and tribulations—some moreso than others—and it doesn’t mean that we all have to write pathetic-wrapped-in-milquetoast anthems to celebrate it.

Craig switched off his iPad at the end of the song and dabbed at the corner of his right eye with his fingertip.

“Dude, are you crying?” I asked with barely restrained incredulity.

“Nah,” he said. “I just get a little misty when I hear that song, that’s all.”

“Why?”

“Brings back memories.”

“Of what?”

He looked at me as though it should be obvious.

Since it wasn’t readily apparent, I crossed my legs on the couch, took a swig of beer, and thought deeply about it.

Then it hit me. Like a freight train. I had to proceed with caution to get what I suspected the answer would be out of him. Delicate subject. Shit.

“You still have feelings for your ex-wife, don’t you?”

He looked away and sighed. That gave me all the affirmation I needed.

I was pissed. Beyond pissed. All this—the nice treatment, the paying of positive romantic attentions, the hot sex—it was all a farce. A huge cosmic joke.

“You miserable fuck! How could you do this to me?” I spat in fury.

“You just want me to hold your hand, listen to you cry, give you some head, and pass the time with you in this fuckville town, but I don’t mean anything to you!”

I punched him as hard as I could in the right shoulder.

“Ow! Cut it out!” he stuttered, clearly astounded at just how quickly I could go from placid to abject fury.

“No!” I shouted. “How dare you do this to me—again! How dare you!”

I was continuing to accent my words with fierce blows to his face, upper arm, and chest. He quickly moved out of my reach and to the other side of the room. I stood up but didn’t follow him.

“How could I have been so stupid? I should’ve known—that shitty poster you did with her that’s still on your wall—by the way, your French ‘I love you’ painted on it is amateurishly wrong—that picture of you two on your wedding day on your Facebook page, the fact that you never want to be seen in public with me—why? Is that so tongues won’t waggle and get back to her that I exist? Fuck you! Fuck! You!”

I was now throwing anything I could get my hands on—the throw pillows on the couch, the glass coasters on the coffee table, a hard-bound copy of Charles Baudelaire’s Les Fleurs du Mal—directly at his head. I have very good aim, and he was really working at dodging my improvised missiles.

“What is your problem?” he shouted furiously at me.

“People like you!” I screeched as I hurled a game console remote at him. “People like you!

“You are so fucking goddamn arrogant! Shakespeare said that it’s better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all! At least you had someone who loved you once! I’ve had no one! No one! I’ve never had a relationship last more than thirty days! Ever! I’ve never been engaged or even had the opportunity to have a man say he loves me! Instead, men just like you always come along and expect me to give some physical comfort and emotional support to them until they feel strong enough to move on to the next dumb cunt they’ll build their live around and toss me by the wayside! And I’m sick of it! Sick! Of! It!

“You had loving parents! You weren’t rejected at every turn! You don’t give and give and give of yourself and get nothing—nothing—in return! I’m the one who’s always there for everyone, and yet, when I need someone to be there for me, I get crickets! Nothing but crickets!

“I even told you all that before we got to doing whatever in the hell we’ve been doing together! And still—I mean nothing to you!

“How could I have been so stupid to think that you’d be different than every other man in my life?”

I stopped shouting because I was overcome with angst, shame, sorrow, and embarrassment. Tears were pouring down my cheeks and my chest was heaving under great sobs. I was absolutely furious. And heartbroken.

“Look, Tinny, I’m—” he started apologetically.

“Shut up! Shut! Up!” I growled through clenched teeth. I grabbed my hoodie and my purse and made my way towards the front door.

Craig stuck his hand out gently to catch my arm and stop me.

“Don’t you touch me!” I snarled as I glared deeply into his eyes.

I then continued my hasty skulk out the door, slamming it as hard as I could on my way out. I hoped all of his neighbors in his quiet little subdivision heard the loud bang in the still night. I wanted them to know about me. I wanted my existence to get back to Craig’s ex-wife.

I heard something inside the house to fall to the floor and shatter.

Good, I thought with malice. Good.  

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