Tuesday, March 4, 2014

Advanced Fiction Writing Assignment 4

It took me a total of 23 hours over 2 days to get this accomplished, but I did it, and I'm totally stoked about the grade I received on it! Enjoy!


Assignment 4

Author’s Note:  Since we have discussed the elements of mystery, adventure, and love stories, my writing assignments for assignments 4, 5, and 6 are to write one of each story. The first story I decided to focus on was the mystery story since those are generally my favorite to read and write. As I wrote my story about my heroine Antigone (pronounced “Ann-tigg-on-ee,” hence the nickname of “Tiggy”), I was surprised at how much of myself I put into her, since I generally don’t like to write characters that are autobiographical in nature. The story was written in a marathon session over two days. The last time I wrote a story of this length, it took me almost a month and a half of not-so diligent work on it to complete it. I do intend at some point to further expand this story, and this is definitely a rough sketch. I definitely see places in this story where I’d touch up this or further explain that. Since the marathon writing session it took to complete this story has wiped me out a bit in terms of ideas and energies, don’t expect to see assignments 5 and 6 for a while yet since they are not due until March 21.

Grade Received:  A-, but only because I didn’t sufficiently “solve” the mystery about the cigarette case, but I did get a lot of positive feedback from the professor and my classmates


Antigone Rising


“Twiggy!” the clerk behind the counter at the kosher deli bellowed above the din and clatter of the lunch rush.

She winced at yet another mispronunciation of her name. Well, her nickname. Her given name was Antigone (she had been the victim of an ancient Hellenic studies major turned college professor mother who’d had an affair with a local tour guide during an undergraduate study-abroad semester in Athens), but everyone (excluding her mother) called her “Tiggy” because most people, being that they weren’t Greek, couldn’t figure out how to say her name properly. But to confuse her with the supermodel Twiggy was a bit much. It wasn’t that she wasn’t reasonably attractive in her own right—it was the fact that she wasn’t a tall, willowy blond. She was short and had dark brown hair and eyes. In fact, she looked like your typical Midwestern girl, not a glamorous Brit.

She handed her debit card to the clerk and tossed some loose change into the tip jar that is a standard feature at such establishments.

“Hey, thanks,” the clerk said as he handed Tiggy her receipt and sandwich. She then made her way through the hurried throng chatting and texting away on their smartphones as they waited to pick up their orders.
As she exited the deli to the bustling metropolitan street, she put in the earbuds to her iPod and started her latest playlist. One of her favorite Fleetwood Mac songs, “Little Lies,” began to play as she made her way north on the sidewalk towards the nearest number 4 bus line stop. As she walked briskly to make the next bus, she glanced upon a rather slow-moving man in the crowd in front of her. His deliberate pace, marked with a slight limp, annoyed her a bit as she began to brush past him. C’mon, I’ve got to get back to work in twenty minutes, she groused mentally as she picked up her pace to get around him.

As she got next to him, she noticed that he was gazing at her out of the corner of his eye. She took notice of him as their eyes met. He was good-looking in a sleazy sort of way, with slicked-back straw-blond hair and hazel eyes. She couldn’t read the expression on his face or in his eyes, which puzzled her. Normally, she could read even the most stoic person as though they were a child’s picture book, and the fact she couldn’t read him troubled her somewhat.

He smiled knowingly at her, briefly nodded his head in salutation, then quickly and deliberately dropped a square, shiny object at her feet.

Convinced this was some sort of accident on his part because she had almost stepped on the expensive-looking little box thing, she bent down to retrieve the item.

“Hey, mister! You dropped this—” she began to say as she stood up. However, the mysterious stranger was nowhere to be found.

She looked up and down and on both sides of the street, but she couldn’t see him anywhere. She darted back a few paces to a dead-end alley she’d passed as she’d tried to outpace him, but he wasn’t in the alley, either. It was like he was a will-o’-the-wisp vanishing with the dawn. She would’ve begun to swear upon all that is holy that he had merely been a figment of her imagination had she not been holding the very real metallic silver case he’d purposefully dropped at her feet.

She began to study the curious thing in her hand. It was rectangular and rather flat and, except for some fancy engraving inlaid with what appeared to be yellow and rose gold, was buffed to a high, mirror-like shine. Odd, she thought. The only fingerprints on this thing are mine.

Thinking back to her training as a jewelry store clerk, she quickly turned the case over to see if she could find any identifying marks to help her trace the owner. Her jaw dropped when she saw the jeweler’s mark on the back.

“Oh my God! I have got to get this back to that guy!” she almost screamed aloud. A few passersby in the crowd looked at her strangely when they heard her exclamation, but they quickly moved on. She put her hand over her gaping mouth.

“This is a custom-made Faberge and it’s twenty-four karat!” she whispered. “He’s gonna say I stole it!”
The bus arrived, and she quickly took an empty seat. She noticed there was a peculiar stone-inlaid mechanism on the seal of the case. She gently touched the red-jeweled hinge. (“Oh no,” she thought, “that’s probably a real ruby!”) The case gently sprung open.

It was an empty cigarette case—a rather odd thing to have these days with all the anti-smoking laws and such—bearing an elaborate inscription in a Cyrillic language she didn’t know. She was really about to freak out about the fact that she couldn’t decipher the case’s inscription when she noticed a part of the message she could read:  an international phone number in Arabic numerals.

She heaved a sigh of relief. Good, all I have to do is call this number and tell that guy I found his cigarette case, she thought. I’ll call him when I get back to work—my cell phone reception isn’t the greatest in this part of town. I’ll be there any minute now.

However, her blood pressure dramatically spiked again as “any minute now” stretched into forty-five due to a four-car accident on the major artery that took her to the area of the city where she worked. Painfully aware that with each passing moment, the mysterious stranger could be one step closer to walking into the nearest police station and reporting the cigarette case stolen, she could poignantly feel each powerful palpitation of her heart as the bus sat and sat and sat on the highway.

By the time the bus stopped at its regular stop three blocks from her workplace, Klopfenstein’s Pharmacy, she was near apoplectic with worry. She sprinted the distance to the store’s back alley employee entrance and nearly broke in the door.

“Whoa! What’s with you?” cried out a portly and good-natured man who was weighing some powder on a scale behind the pharmacy counter.

“Can’t talk, Dr. K.! I gotta use the office phone!” she called to the pharmacist as she dashed her way into the back office.

She frantically dialed the phone, only to receive the automaton operator voice that disappointingly told her to hang up or try again later as the number she was dialing was out of service. She moaned in despair.

“What is all this about?” demanded Dr. K. as he walked into the back office.

Nearly in tears, Tiggy related her story to the kindly pharmacy owner who was her boss.

“Huh. Is that so, Tigs?” he said in a perplexed manner. “That is so weird! Better call the cops. A best defense is a good offense. I’ll vouch for you.”

Tiggy dialed the local police precinct and related to the receptionist who answered only that she’d found this fancy cigarette case in the street and wanted to get it back to its rightful owner. She felt that they wouldn’t believe the rest of her story, so she conveniently “forgot” it. It could be “need to know” information—a highly classified secret, so to say—between herself and her boss.

“All right,” the precinct’s secretary droned absent-mindedly into the phone. “We’ll get a detective out there to get this—what did you say it was?—oh, a cigarette case—as soon as possible. Thank you.”

“Thanks,” mumbled Tiggy as she hung up the phone. She felt better knowing that someone official was coming to get it, but at the same time, it gave her the heebie-jeebies just to have such an expensive item in her possession, no matter how brief a period of time it was.

“Hey, Dr. K.! I’m going to put this in the safe until the cop comes,” she called to her boss, who had returned to the compounding part of the pharmacy to weigh more powder by this point.

“Good idea, Tigs.”

She made her way to the compounding part of the pharmacy and began to peck away at the computer to check on any new orders that had come in while she was on her lunch.

“Ugh. Of all the luck in the world…” she began dejectedly.

“Yeah, Tigs,” Dr. K. said empathetically. “You sure do have some strange luck.” He quickly changed the subject.

“How are your classes going? Need any help?”

“Oh, no,” she said distractedly. “I’m pulling a good B-average in O-chem.”

“You mean the infamous ‘O-Hell chem’? Well, let’s see if we can’t get that B average of yours up to an A after your shift ends today,” the pharmacist replied. Tiggy had always loved how Dr. K. had taken a friendly paternal interest in her and her grades since she’d told him of her plans to go to pharmacy school after she finished up her bachelor degree in neuroscience at City College during her job interview.

“Oh, sorry, I can’t today,” she said apologetically. “I’ve got a test in my 4:30 anthropology class. Some other time. Thanks, though.”

“Well, I’ll have Jason arrange a time to help you study your organic chemistry,” Dr. K. said with a sly smile. He knew his son, a pharmacy school resident who he was grooming to take over the family business, and his pretty young pharmacy technician had taken a fancy to one another and had a genuinely affectionate rapport. He was truly fond of Tiggy, too, and hoped that someday wedding bells might be in the air for those two. She was an extremely clever and pragmatic young woman and would definitely be an asset in the family pharmacy, a good counter-balance to Jason’s somewhat dreamy nature.

Tiggy smiled shyly at his statement and felt a slight blush spread over her face.

“Well, Dr. K., I better get to work. We had seven orders come in while I was out, and you don’t pay me to talk about my weird life,” she said with a laugh as she began to print off the new orders and organize them into the appropriate categories for easier filling.

The rest of the day passed uneventfully, except for the fact that the promised detective never showed up to collect the mystery man’s cigarette case. It was somewhat strange that no one came, but the crime rate in the city was very high, so maybe the city’s finest were otherwise preoccupied. Noting that the detective hadn’t graced the pharmacy with his or her presence, she asked Dr. K., whose judgment she trusted as much as, if not more than, her own, what she should do.

“Tigs, I’d call that number in the case again. And the cops, too. But at the very least, you should let the poor guy know you’ve got his fancy case and that it hasn’t been melted down yet. He’s probably worried sick about it.”

She dialed the strange number again. Thankfully the call went through with this attempt. But it went straight to voicemail, which heightened her anxieties again. Not only was the recorded message in a strange, garbled language she didn’t understand, but it was also prompting her to enter some sort of code she didn’t know. She quickly hung up on the recording, a sinking feeling in her stomach. I’m never going to find this guy, her inner voice wailed in despair.

As she reached down to the office phone’s dial pad to dial the local police precinct, the phone rang shrilly.
“Klopfenstein’s, Antigone speaking! How may I help you?” she said in her most professional manner, trying not to betray that she was in any way troubled by anything.

A deep, heavily accented voice came over the line:  “No police action is necessary. Await further instructions.”

“What? Who is this? Is this some sort of joke?” she nearly screamed into the receiver.

“Await further instructions. That is all.”

The line then went dead.

Her heart sank. That feeling she always got in the pit of her stomach whenever she read someone like a book hit her hard. She knew that the owner of the voice knew she had the case. She also knew that she had to do exactly what the voice said without asking any questions. It was a life or death matter, and her life was on the line.

“Hey Tiggy! Who was that?” asked Jason as he stepped into the back office to take over the pharmaceutical duties from his father for the day.

She looked at him painfully.

“Please don’t make me explain!” she whispered, tears in her eyes.

“What’s going on? Who called?” asked Dr. K. as he barged into the office to check on Tiggy, whose tone during the phone call had alarmed him.

“That call—I need to leave now—with the case—” she half-whispered, half-sobbed. She abruptly gathered up her coat, purse, and cell phone and began to dial the combination on the safe to retrieve the case.
“Wait! Where are you going?” sputtered father and son in unison.

“I don’t—I can’t—I’ll be O. K.!” she cried as she grabbed the case, slammed the safe door closed, and made her way to the back door of the pharmacy as quickly as she could. For some reason, she had felt the urge to be extremely secretive and ashamed around the two people around whom she’d always felt the most comfortable.

As soon as she reached the alley behind the pharmacy, her cell phone screamed for her attention.

“Hello?” she nearly shrieked. She was terrified.

The voice answered.

“Take a cab to 223 North Columbus. Give the driver the fifty-dollar bill in your wallet. Yes, your emergency cash. No questions. That is all.”

The call ended before she could protest, so she blindly followed the instructions she’d been given, wondering how the voice knew about the money she kept in her wallet’s secret pocket. She hailed a cab as soon as she reached the street, gave the driver the address, and within about twenty minutes she was in a grubby, bleak, and deserted warehouse district by the waterfront. She was petrified.

“Hey, lady, 223 don’t exist nowhere,” barked the cabbie. “You want me to stop here? This is 219. The next one is 225.”

“Um, yeah. That’s fine,” she said distractedly. That address had to be around here somewhere, she thought. She quickly paid the fare with her debit card. Then she remembered the instruction about the fifty-dollar bill.

“Here!” she said as she shoved the bill into the cabbie’s face and stepped out of the vehicle. She heard the door slam eerily behind her.

“Hey lady! Thanks!” called the cabbie out of his driver’s side window as he began to speed off. This part of town didn’t just give Tiggy the creeps
.
She stood and stared at the deserted landscape, her nerves on edge, waiting for someone or something to appear. The deafening silence of the wharf enveloped her.

The sun had begun to set, and the sharp, unforgiving winter wind that blew off the lake whipped through her hair, tore at her face, and chilled her bones.

Suddenly, a distant tugboat let out a muted blast on its smokestack. She nearly leapt out of her skin and whirled around, looking for the source, even though she knew from where it had originated.

She wrapped her arms tightly around her chest in a desperate attempt to stay tolerably warm and prayed that whoever was going to show up would just hurry up about it because she was terribly cold.

As if on cue, she heard the rumble of a powerful car engine as it sped towards her. Panicked, she looked for a place to hide but could only press herself tightly against the side of an empty warehouse as the lumbering black luxury sedan squealed to a stop in front of her. The rear door nearest to her opened.

“Get in,” said the man who possessed the voice on the phone. His tone was rather abrupt and demanding, and it instantly offended her. He was an extremely large and swarthy dark haired man with a long scar on the left side of his face and one black beady eye that glared at her from the right.

Angered by the whole situation, Tiggy glared at him harshly and reached into the coat pocket where she kept her trusty Swiss Army knife. What did this creeper want with her, anyway? How dare he just demand that she just get into a car with him with no explanation!

“No!” shouted Tiggy.

“I’m not getting into that car with you! Here’s your stupid cigarette case!” she spat furiously as she threw the expensive item at him. It landed at his feet just as he stepped out of the car. He didn’t even glance at it as it clattered on the ground in front of him.

“Look! Don’t make me force you to come with me!” the one-eyed stranger said almost apologetically.

“No! Absolutely not! Go to hell!” Her eyes and countenance were wild with defiance. She was psychically daring him to come within arm’s reach of her. Just you come a little closer and you’ll be so sorry, her inner voice snarled. She pulled out the knife and extended its respectable blade.

“Don’t you come near me!” she hissed at him in a blind rage as she showed him the business end of the instrument.

“Have it your way,” the one-eyed man said matter-of-factly as he calmly began to walk towards her.
“Stay back!” she cried as she began to wildly swing the knife blade at him with each step he took. But he was nonplussed. From his appearance alone, she could tell that the man was a fierce fighter who could handle a large dose of pain. I might want to consider running, she thought.

She turned in order to attempt to run off, but instead of freedom, she came face-to-face with another man who’d seemingly appeared out of nowhere. This man looked like a shady small-town used car salesman. He was small in stature and frame and had a bleach-blond mullet, yellow-lensed aviator sunglasses, and a loudly patterned brown and green plaid blazer.

“Night night,” he said with a gold-tooth revealing slimy smile as he pressed a cloth saturated with some sort of pungent chemical over her nose and mouth. She fought back wildly for a moment, but the little dude was frighteningly strong, and she quickly lost consciousness.

When she woke up, night had decidedly fallen, and her bleary eyes revealed that she was in the back seat of the luxury car that had pulled up next to her earlier, sandwiched between Mr. Mullet and One-Eye. She expected their aromas to be as repulsive as their countenances were and their behaviors had been, but she was pleasantly surprised. Mr. Mullet smelled pleasantly of a fine men’s cologne and One-Eye smelled like Downy fabric softener. Hey, if I’ve got to be wedged between psychos, at least I don’t have to smell creepy funk, too, she thought.

There was an oppressive silence between all of the car’s occupants. The car’s radio softly played classical music while the heater emitted a pleasant warmth.

“So yer awake,” drawled Mr. Mullet with a Southern accent that is peculiar to West Texans. He had removed the hideous blazer and was now wearing a pair of neatly -pressed khakis and a simple white button-up shirt. He smiled genially at her. She was not impressed, and the expression on her face revealed that fact. He lost the smile.

She was about to resume her escape attempt when she saw that Mr. Mullet was packing serious heat in both a shoulder holster and a gun belt at his waist. She decided it would be best not to try anything fancy. She also decided that if anyone in the car decided to ask questions, it might not be a good idea to be flippant.

“Great, I’m a prisoner, and I have to mind my manners. Worst. Day. Ever,” she thought. Mr. Mullet looked at her again, and she couldn’t help but glare at him. She was still pretty irritated about the whole ordeal, and she was going to let everyone in the car know about it in the subtlest manner so she didn’t get killed and dumped on the side of the road.

You’re not getting off the hook that easy, her eyes said to Mr. Mullet. Don’t even think I’m remotely happy about waking up next to you.

He cleared his throat and began talking to her as though they had been having some sort of witty and friendly tête-à-tête, as though he hadn’t just muzzled her with a chloroform-soaked cloth and help stuff her into the back seat of an unfamiliar car that was speeding down the highway towards destinations unknown.

“So, Antigone, are ya hungry? Thirsty?”

“No,” she said suspiciously as her eyes narrowed when their mutual gazes met. “Um, you just shoved a caustic rag into my face and forced me into this car. No offense, but it might not be such a good idea for me to accept any source of nourishment from you.”

He guffawed at this while One-Eye sat stonily silent and gazed out of the car’s side window.

“Don’t force her into anything else,” One-Eye suddenly said authoritatively. “We have our instructions!”

At this, Mr. Mullet fell into a somber mood. “Yer right, Laszlo, yer right.”

At this, Tiggy perked up.

“Hey! What the hell is this about? Instructions? What instructions?” Tiggy said indignantly as she simultaneously began to think:  “You can take your instructions and—”

“And what?” said Laszlo sharply, abruptly cutting off her thoughts. He glared at her with his one eye.

She was perplexed and alarmed. Had he just read her mind?

Mr. Mullet started to dryly offer an explanation:  “Yes, we can all, quote-unquote, read your mind. Everyone in this car. In fact— ”

“Sam! Shut up! She is not to know!” Laszlo barked.

“Not to know about what?” Tiggy said apprehensively. This is getting too weird, she thought.

“You will understand when you meet with Dr. Teppler,” Laszlo replied curtly.

“Excuse me, but aren’t I at least owed some sort of explanation about all this?” she said warily. Clearly, she’d pushed some of Laszlo One-Eye’s buttons with her words and thoughts, and she didn’t want to further aggrieve him because he seemed more dangerous than Sam Mullet. Mullet Man was clearly the strength and speed of the two, but she was pretty sure Ol’ Black Eye was the evil.

“Would you kindly stop referring to me as ‘One-Eye’ in your thoughts?” said Laszlo peevishly. “Yes, I can hear them, and therefore it is rude to keep insulting me by thinking of me by that! I lost my eye when I was a child in Kosovo and took some shrapnel from a bomb to the face—” He was growing angrier as he went on, so Tiggy quickly cut him off.

“Sorry! I’m sorry! If you’d come up to me and introduced yourself, I swear I wouldn’t have thought about your eye!”

“Oh, don’t give me that crap! Everyone thinks about my eye! I can read minds, remember?”

“Sorry! You’re right! But I wouldn’t have thought you were such a—”

“Hey! Watch your mouth! It ain’t ladylike to swear like you do!” interjected Sam. “And the last name’s Bookings, not ‘Mullet’! In fact, this ugly thing is a wig.” He pulled off the long blond abomination to reveal a military-style buzz cut beneath. He also popped off the gold tooth cap and showed it to her. “See? It’s all a disguise.”

“Sam! What are you doing?” Laszlo cried incredulously.

“Aww hell, Laszlo, we’re almost to the base, so she might as well know something!” Sam said fiercely.

Tiggy was beginning to warm up to Sam somewhat. She felt he’d at least be as honest as he could be with her about this whole ordeal eventually. Clearly this level of secrecy was already starting to get to him, which she knew she could, at some point, work to her advantage, even if she couldn’t read him yet. That fact alone made her distrust him less than Laszlo. She felt that Sam could potentially be reasoned with, while Laszlo seemed like he was just one big, inflexible turd.

It was a moonless night, and the oppressive darkness of the remote area they were now driving in was practically suffocating. It didn’t help that about ten miles back, the driver had suddenly switched off the car’s headlights and was driving totally blind. Not that you could tell from the way he was driving on the winding, hilly, heavily forested roads. Obviously the man was a pro at night driving sans lights and knew exactly where they were going.

They eventually came upon the tallest chain-link fence topped with razor wire that Tiggy had ever seen. There was one white streetlight lighting an entryway in the fencing. Two armed guards in olive drab military uniforms with black berets stood beneath the light and in front of a gate. Another guard was standing on the other side of the fence, about six feet away from the gate. He was holding a leash with a rather large dog at the end of it that was pulling at the lead with aggressive anxiety and whining and whimpering loudly. Clearly, the canine wanted blood. Badly. Tiggy swallowed hard. Now was not the time to bring up her extreme fear of dogs, verbally or psychologically.

Tiggy stared at the dog with an almost crazed intent and tried to moderate her rapid, shallow breathing. While everyone at the gate was equally menacing, Fido took the cake in her eyes. He was some sort of shepherd type that had clearly been specially bred to be monstrously large and fiercely powerful and obviously had the personality traits that would allow him to happily disembowel you with a single bite the moment he was given the command to do so.

She swallowed hard. I take it I should stay away from Dogzilla there, she thought as the car slowed for the guards.

“Once you are done with your lessons with Dr. Teppler, dogs like that won’t pose a problem for you,” Laszlo quipped as he, Sam, and the car’s driver flashed special badges at the checkpoint. The guards waved them through and saluted.

Once the momentary danger of being eaten alive by Dogzilla had passed as they drove through the gate, Tiggy began to relax a bit.

“Um, where are we, or can’t I know that?” she asked.

“Let’s just say we’re in the middle of Michigan’s Upper Peninsula,” said Sam as he let out a small yawn.

“What? I was in downtown Rapid City when you grabbed me! How long have we been driving?”

“It’s about 11:30 local time,” said Laszlo, “so about eight and a half hours.”

“Why that long? We should be in Canada at that rate!”

“We cannot take direct routes on missions such as this,” Laszlo sighed.

“All right,” Tiggy said, not entirely satisfied with that explanation. “So this place we’re going to, does it have a name, or is that classified information, too?”

After about a ten-minute silence, her question was finally answered.

“Technically, it doesn’t have a name,” said Sam. “We just call it ‘Hogwarts’ for shits and giggles.”

At this point, they had pulled up in front of an imposing windowless building constructed of concrete blocks and topped with more razor wire. Only the occasionally occurring turret, complete with pacing armed guards, broke up the roofline of the otherwise standard-issue rectangular government-constructed fortress.
“What the hell is this place? A prison?” asked Tiggy, alarm creeping into her voice.

“Naw,” drawled Sam lazily. It was obviously past his bedtime, she noted as she began to get a slight read on him. “We call it ‘Hogwarts’ because it’s just like that—a sort of special school for people with—um—extraordinary abilities.”

“Well, then, have you got the wrong person!” she exclaimed with a soft laugh. “I’m about as average as they come. The joke’s on you. And whoever sent you.”

“Nonsense,” said Laszlo confidently as he opened the car door and flashed his badge at another set of guards who saluted and then opened a set of heavily-barred steel doors. He turned to her. “Are you going to come peacefully with me now, or will we have a repeat of this afternoon’s drama?”

Tiggy glared at Laszlo for his snotty sarcasm. If you can really read my mind or whatever, then you already know the answer to that question, she thought, clearly annoyed.

“Good,” chirped Laszlo, whose mood was noticeably improving. “I’m a bit tired of dragging women around today.”

“Impertinence ain’t your strong suit, kid,” said Sam as they made their way inside the fortress. She shot him a dirty look. She hated to be called “kid.”

“I know that,” said Sam with a laugh as they made their way down an aggressively bright and rather narrow hallway. “That’s to get you back for referring to me as ‘Mullet’ for half the evening.”

They entered a large, nearly vacant, and poorly-lit room and sat in some rather comfortable chairs surrounding a large conference table. Three men then walked in. One was in a military uniform similar to the ones worn by the guards, one was in a smart gray suit with a royal purple tie, and one was in a white medical lab jacket. The man in the lab jacket spoke first.

“Ah, Miss Antigone Polynices, so at least we meet,” he said quietly and evening with a slight hint of a Scottish accent. Tiggy immediately recognized him as the man who had dropped the cigarette case in the street.

“You must be Dr. Teppler,” she said, her original wariness and skepticism returning.

“Yes. I am Dr. Alexander Teppler, and these are my colleagues, CIA Special Agent Rhine Shelton and General Michael McMorrison,” he replied as he gestured first to the man in the suit and then to the man in the military garb.

Tiggy could read the general like an extremely simple children’s book, a fact which relieved her since she had spent the majority of her day being unable to read anyone she’d encountered since she’d retrieved the cigarette case off of the ground. Unfortunately, he was the only person in the room she could read. As she looked him over knowingly, he shifted uncomfortably on his feet and scowled. Whatever goes on here, he doesn’t believe in it, she thought.

“This better be good, Teppler,” McMorrison barked gruffly as he took a seat at the table on the side opposite of Tiggy and her escorts.

“I can assure you it will be,” said Teppler smoothly. “Miss Polynices here already knows you are skeptical about my research and the program we run here.”

“Look, the DOD’s got a shitload of money tied up in this. If word gets out that we’re spending what we’re spending on hocus-pocus, the public will have a coronary!” McMorrison shot back, clearly unconvinced by Teppler’s statement of reassurance. Tiggy could clearly see that the general thought that his time was being wasted with this whole endeavor. No special abilities—if she really had any—were needed for that.

“DOD stands for Department of Defense,” said Shelton in response to Tiggy’s wondering at the acronym. “But we at the CIA are very interested in the program here, as well. And, yes, I just heard your thoughts, too. In fact, the only one in this room who can’t hear them is General McMorrison, which is why he is so—well, how should I say it?—cautious about this whole project.”

“O. K. That’s just freakin’ creepy!” Tiggy said before she could stop herself. She immediately felt a sense of embarrassment as everyone in the room, except for McMorrison, laughed heartily.

“She has a point,” grunted the general.

“Yes,” cooed Dr. Teppler good naturedly. “At first, being around others with your abilities makes one feel, well, a bit naked, at least psychically. But you will learn how to close yourself off to unwanted ‘mental espionage,’ as we call it.”

“Um, O. K.,” said the still disbelieving Tiggy. “So, you really think I should be here?”

“But of course!” replied the doctor enthusiastically. “You see, my dear, you are literally one in a billion! Your gifts are quite unique and extraordinary!”

“And what gifts would those be?” she asked, clearly mystified at the fact that she could be anything other than Plain Jane ordinary. He continued:

“Well—how should I explain it?—your grandmother called it your ‘knowing.’ As I recall, she was always saying:  ‘Well Tiggy’s just so clever about things—she just knows.’

“Do you remember your mother taking you to see Dr. Helene Lirette throughout your childhood at Spalding State University?”

“Uh, yeah,” replied Tiggy. “She was a really nice lady and we played a lot of fun games, but I still don’t see where this is going.”

“Well,” explained the doctor. “Dr. Lirette was my predecessor in this program, which we call ‘Acute Psychotelekinetic Sensitivities,’ or ‘APS’ for short. Basically, we determined through all of those tests you took as a child—oh, you were told they were games as a child to ensure your complete cooperation—that you possess a range of mental abilities beyond that of the average, or even highly above average, human being.

“The point of this program is to help you fully manifest those abilities in your day-to-day life, as we feel they are highly desirable qualities to be totally aware and totally in control of.”

“But why not just tell me that?” Tiggy said incredulously. “Why the whole bit with the cigarette case?”

“Would you have believed in all of this had I merely phoned you or sent you a form letter?” Dr. Teppler said as he made deep direct eye contact with her. She quickly looked away.

“Probably not,” she sighed.

“Exactly my point, my dear! Exactly my point! Now do you understand?”

“O. K. So I have some special powers, but what’s with the government cheese in the room?” she said as she looked at Shelton and McMorrison.

“Well,” Shelton answered, “we at the CIA feel that people with your abilities could do quite a bit of good for our national security, and I’m sure the brass at the Pentagon would agree.” He stole a sideways glance at McMorrison, who merely grunted and crossed his arms on the table in front of him.

“But shouldn’t I have a choice about getting involved in this kind of stuff?” Tiggy asked warily.

“No, you don’t,” came General McMorrison’s overly stern and deadly serious reply as he stared her down and scowled.

    

   
     



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